teacher feedback.

Comments on the style of our video was "a quirky and effective approach to the genre of music" which we liked. Camerawork was also praised, but transitions need to be done. We was told that we need to treat the animate like cinematic footage, meaning include a variety of angles, movement and distance, which is something we feel we definitely need to be more aware of. Also, to fit in with our genre's conventions, we should probably include a few close-ups of our main characters face to get some expressions. Overall, feedback was good, but it has definitely highlighted aspects we need to focus more on when editing and doing our final bit of filming.